2013年11月14日 星期四

Topic, main ideas, topic sentences

Topic: How interesting anime influence anime fans


Main idea: Interesting anime is not just an interest to anime fans. It gives self-confidence to anime fans and makes them show their true colors because of certain unique characters/roles.      

Topic sentence 1: One of the most interesting parts of anime is the design of characters. Interesting  designs like having super powers, perfect personalities and good lookings, is just like helping us make our imagination come true. 

a. Characters are based on authors' fantasy. Those kind of people won't really exist in reality. (+ examples/pictures)
ex1: The author of Gintama said the characters' personalities reflects his annoying parts.
ex2: Attack on Titan is a very popular anime about human tries to survive under the giants attack. The author thinks some times people need to have the courage to fight back, so most of the characters in this comic are brave and skilled.

b. Characters' personalities.
ex1: Dramatic facial expressions, body movements and customs.
ex2. Perfect personalities and lookings. (very thoughtful, big eyes, in good shape)
ex2: Super powers.

Topic sentences 2: Anime greatly influences and changes anime fan lives.
a. The inspiring or funny stories gives anime fans courage to face their difficulties.
ex: The author of  "次元突破 動漫迷的巡禮勝地 10部超人氣動漫x100個熱門動漫場景滿載攻略" said sitting in front of the TV watching anime or reading comics on the bed or toilets, is his simplest way to face the problems and he can always get comfort from it. To visit his favorite scene in anime is just like walking into the screen or the comic pages, the feelings are incredible. This gives him the courage and strength to return to real life. (This is also close to the way how anime influences me.)

b.Cosplay is an antidote to the cosplayer's high stress job.
ex1: According to a TV show Andrew Zimmern's "Explore Cosplay in Tokyo", the cosplayer he interviewed said the cosplay's purpose is " different character different life". She said it is cool to sort of get lost into another world.
ex2: According to a book called "COSPLAY  同人誌之秘密花園“, it says cosplayers hide their own personality and implantation the anime characters' personality in order to expand the other side of themselves. They will get a sense of accomplishment from being photographed , watched, approved and praised. They will also be satisfied which is what they can't get from their daily life. 

2013年11月11日 星期一

Topic, main ideas, topic sentences

Topic: How interesting anime influence anime fans
Main idea: Interesting anime is not just an interest to anime fans. It gives self-confidence to anime fans and makes them show their true colors because of certain unique characters/roles.      

Topic sentence 1: One of the most interesting parts of anime is the setting of characters. The characters can do things we aren't able to do. Just like helping us make our dream come true.
a. Characters are based on authors' fantasy. Those kind of people won't really exist in reality. (+ examples/pictures)                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                
b. Characters' dramatic facial expressions, body movements and customs. (+ examples/pictures or videos)
c. Characters' super powers. (+ examples/pictures or videos)

Topic sentences 2: How anime influences or changes anime fans?
a. The inspiring or funny stories gives anime fans courage to face their difficulties.
b. An example from a book called "次元突破 動漫迷的巡禮勝地 10部超人氣動漫x100個熱門動漫場景滿載攻略" The book is mainly about the author visiting the  scenes from anime. To him, anime is an exit to escape from reality. Sitting in front of the TV watching anime or reading comics on the bed or toilets, is his simplest way to face the problems and he can always get comfort from it. To visit his favorite scene in anime is just like walking into the screen or the comic pages, the feelings are incredible. This gives him the courage and strength to return to real life. (This is also close to the way how anime influences me.)
c. Other funny examples.(spending too much money and more time at home, people they saw on roads can't meet their imagination, the changing of their rooms' decorations.)
d. According to a TV show Andrew Zimmern's "Explore Cosplay in Tokyo", the cosplayer he interviewed said the cosplay's purpose is " different character different life". Cosplay is an antidote to the cosplayer's high stress job, she also said it is cool to sort of get lost into another world.


2013年11月10日 星期日

Topic, Topic Statement, Main Ideas

Topic: How interesting animations influence anime fans

Main idea: Interesting animes such as Nodame Cantabile give self-confidence to anime fans and make them show their true colors because of certain unique characters/roles.

Topic sentence for paragraph 1: 
Anime is interesting because the stories and characters are attractive. The basic strategy of Japanese comic is the setting of characters. The character should be ordinary and has similar age with readers. In order to narrow the distance between the character and readers. Make them have a sense of identity and project themselves on the character. This will arouse their interest in reading the comic and then like it. The setting of the characters are also based on the authors' fantasy. Those kind of people won't really exist in reality. Especially their dramatic facial expression and costumes. They can do things we aren't able to do. 

Topic sentence for paragraph 2:
The characters in anime influence anime fans a lot, take me for example, my favorite comic book, Gintama, is a comedy always makes me laugh. The main character is also the one that I identify with the most. He is very lazy and is mean to others, but when someone is in need he will definitely help him or her. No matter what kind of mess he gets into, he will find a way to solve it. This comic book gives me a lot of courage to face my difficulties. 
Article from 次元突破 動漫迷的巡禮勝地 10部超人氣動漫x100個熱門動漫場景滿載攻略
What kind of positions does anime plays in your mind? To me, it is the introductory textbook of Japanese culture; it is a good partner of learning Japanese and it is a good helper to start a conversation to communicate with people. The most important of all, it is an exit. It is an exit to escape from reality. In my busy life, when I encounters difficulties I usually chooses to escape. To escape into a world different from reality. Sitting in front of the TV watching anime or reading comics on the bed or toilets, is my simplest way to face the problems and I can always get comfort from it. To visit my favorite scene in anime is just like walking into the screen or the comic pages, the feelings are incredible. This gives me the courage and strength to return to real life.

Topic sentence for paragraph 3:
Because of the influences, most of the anime fans aren't afraid to show their true selves. So they invented an activity called "cosplay". Maybe they are a shy person during their daily lives but when it comes to cosplaying, they will become very confident, they are very "into" the character they identified to themselves. According to a TV show Andrew Zimmern's "Explore Cosplay in Tokyo", the cosplayer he interviewed said the cosplay's purpose is " different character different life". Cosplay is an antidote to the cosplayer's high stress job, she also said it is cool to sort of get lost into another world. And one of a hottest trends right now is women going as boys. Because they are girl already, so they can wear skirts in daily life. So they want to try to become "handsome boys" in cosplay's world. Cosplayers hide their own personality and implantation the anime characters' personality in order to expand the other side of themselves. They will get a sense of accomplishment from being photographed , watched, approved and praised. They will also be satisfied which is what they can't get from their daily life. 

2013年11月6日 星期三

Advice, Topic, Topic Statement, Main Ideas

Teacher Hazel 's advices:
1. Don't talk too much about the stories.
2. Use interesting or funny videos and pictures.
3. The length of the videos shouldn't be to long.

Topic: Anime
Main Idea: The interesting parts of anime.
Topic Statement:
1. Introduce the interesting parts of anime.
2. Tell how anime influences anime fans.

2013年11月2日 星期六

Outline 4

Interesting stories:
1. Nodame Cantabile: Shinichi Chiaki, an arrogant perfectionist is a top student in a music college. The story begins when he met a weird but talented girl, Nodame, who totally changed his life. Along the way pursuing their dreams, they met a lot crazy people like Nodame but had same dreams with them.

This story is really funny, the character's facial expression are all dramatic. This comic's most famous and funny part is when Chiaki is angry for Nodame's silly behaviors, he will throw things to her.
Besides the funny parts, this comic introduces musicians, like their works and stories. I learn more about music from this comic.

2. Natsume's Book of Friends: The main character Natsume is a high school student has the ability to see youkai (spirits 妖怪), inheriting the power of his grandma. Upon her death, his grandma bequeaths him her "Book of Friends", a book containing names of youkai. The Book of Friends is a highly prized item in the youkai world, and they haunt Takashi constantly.

One of a reason I like this story is because of the cute youkai. Though there are still bad youkai try to kill Natsume but most of them are very kind. For example, Nyanko-sensei, my favorite youkai, is a very fat cat who protects Natsume.

3. Fairy Tail: This is a fantasy story about people with magic. Fairy Tail is a wizards' guild, they will use their magic to complete missions in order to make make money. It is mainly about a group of young wizards' adventures.