Teacher Hazel 's advices:
1. Don't talk too much about the stories.
2. Use interesting or funny videos and pictures.
3. The length of the videos shouldn't be to long.
Topic: Anime
Main Idea: The interesting parts of anime.
Topic Statement:
1. Introduce the interesting parts of anime.
2. Tell how anime influences anime fans.
1. Don't talk too much about the stories.
2. Use interesting or funny videos and pictures.
3. The length of the videos shouldn't be to long.
Topic: Anime
Main Idea: The interesting parts of anime.
Topic Statement:
1. Introduce the interesting parts of anime.
2. Tell how anime influences anime fans.
The topic, the main idea snd topic sentences are too broad.
回覆刪除Here is an example:
Topic: How interesting animations influence anime fans
Main idea: Interesting animes such as Nodame Cantabile give self-confidence to anime fans and make them show their true colors because of certain unique characters/roles.
Topic sentence for paragraph 1: Anime is interesting because ... (Finish the sentence. I am just giving an example here.)
Topic sentence for paragraph 2: The roles such as ... influence the fans in positive ways because of their very confident personalities.
Topic sentence for paragraph 3: The anime fans aren't afraid to show their true selves for like ... (a certain character in a story), they are taught to be who they are.
Be specific. State the interesting parts and the influence. Post a new entry BEFORE Nov. 9 (Sun.).